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Dazed and Confused (1993)
IMDB rating: 7.50
Plot: In a small Texas enclave, highlights the rites of passage on the last day of school in 1976 for the new, incoming freshmen at the hands of the class of ‘77 at Robert E. Lee High School. Freshman boys are physically punished, while the girls largely face the brunt of verbal abuse and humiliation. Two main figures emerge. Incoming freshman Mitch Kramer comes to a new realization in his role as a major target of senior hazing. And, among the seniors is Randall “Pink” Floyd, the school’s star quarterback, who moves with facile grace among groups of greasers, nerds, stoners, and athletes alike.
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Directors: Linklater Richard
Actors: London Jason,Cochrane Rory,Wiley Wiggins,Jenson Sasha,Goldberg Adam,Rapp Anthony,McConaughey Matthew,Andrews Shawn,Hauser Cole,Affleck Ben,Comedy,Drama,
What do you think of my poem "Forbidden"?
Forbidden
rain pours down in a lonely place,
silence forever,
tears down my face,
unknown hate falls across my eyes,
pain is plain,
what a disgrace,
wind blows fury across the land,
i sit here waiting,
feeling doomed and trapped,
thunder sounds,
the earth quakes,
i feel my heart – my soul break,
i feel alone like never before,
from only being wanted,
i wish i were nevermore,
i fall into an endless black,
forever crying,
wanting to turn back,
flowers wilt,
endless guilt,
why do i feel this way,
the clouds of grey that fill my mind,
the sky,
leave me confused and dazed,
a flicker of light shines in the night,
a small ray of hope,
a dream,
never could it be,
for me,
i fall to my knees,
wanting to hide,
wanting to be held,
sun shines upon me warming my face,
blushing grows,
my innocence knows,
it is time,
the ray of hope begins to waver,
fading away,
darkness grows,
i really don’t know,
shyness falls across my face,
only i know,
maybe i should go,
or should i?
Stunning,,,,
You told a story in each line
The flow in it was so beautifully told,
Precise
There was nothing wasted
( and since when can’t you use the word I, that’s new to me )
The title? Staggering,,,perfect,,,, I always get stuck on titles,
and use a line, phrase from the poem.
I really enjoyed the concept that your title was a word not found in your poem.
Lola | Nov 18, 2009
you should use better adj. and never say "i feel" or use "i". use metaphors.instead of saying "i fall into an endless black" you should say "falling into an endless black". write it so the reader can relate to you. its pretty good though.
themisale | Nov 17, 2009
I think your poem is really good :] I imagine it like an empty place that has something special about it… great job!
chelley.12 | Nov 17, 2009
omg wow i think this is really good. hah im no professional writer but i do wanna say that my poems are good and yours are like 10x better than mine. my life isnt always the best so mine are like about cutting, being depressed, hating parents and stuff like that but i really do like yours. keep writing and keep up the good work!
Manda E | Nov 17, 2009
Oh my! You know I utterly hate poems like these. The bore me, and I can’t stand reading then wat. So. Ever! But guess what?!
Your poem made me stay reading it, I live for poems like these. Thank you for that lovely poem for me to read.
Magic Eight Ball | Nov 17, 2009
Using ‘I’ is fine in poetry. The above person is wrong.
You paint a picture of misery, but it feels trite. Your expression is not new, not fresh. Forever the wordsmith’s purpose is to create a novel way of expression.
Keep at it. You have potential!
Geoffry | Nov 17, 2009
SPAMMER.
Happy Hiram | Nov 18, 2009
This brings on the feelings of sadness and blackness. Yeah, you got it.
Krazy | Nov 18, 2009
This poem is so full of emotion its brilliant in my opinion its almost a definition of depression and hopelessness. Great job!
pocpaul | Nov 18, 2009
